I think it's lovely. Just a couple of suggestions (this is what I would do, anyway...)
I'd remove one of the belly muscle lines and maybe have the belly at an angle to 'stylise' the image? Also, when you're doing a line drawing it's really good to vary the thickness of the line in places, to emphasis areas. It just adds a bit of depth.
I think it's really effective though, a very good idea! I haven't seen it anywhere else in this form, so I think you're fine :)
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Date: 2007-08-20 08:40 pm (UTC)I'd remove one of the belly muscle lines and maybe have the belly at an angle to 'stylise' the image? Also, when you're doing a line drawing it's really good to vary the thickness of the line in places, to emphasis areas. It just adds a bit of depth.
I think it's really effective though, a very good idea! I haven't seen it anywhere else in this form, so I think you're fine :)